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先日、「お正月休みはいつまで？」という英語日記を書きました。
英会話の先生に、おねがして手直ししてもらったので、
みてください。

まず、私の書いたやつをもういちど。

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How long is your New Year's holiday?

Mine is only 3 days!

I work until December 31 th and start work from tomorrow. It's too short for me.

I visited my parents' place and my sisiter's.
I had a New Year's soup "Ozouni".and a Osechi made by my mom.

The mochi in Ozouni was so good! Very soft and stretcy!
I heard It was made in a old fashioned, with giant stone mortar and wooden mallet.

This makes me feel that we are in th New Year. :D

Have a great rest of the New Year's holiday!

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次は先生のコメント

"I worked until December 31st and am going to work from tomorrow" makes sense, but you can make it easier to understand if you use "back again." I edited your diary below:

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How long is your New Year's holiday?

Mine is only 3 days!


I worked until December 31st and I'm back again tomorrow. It's too short for me.

I visited my parents' place and my sister's, too.
I had a New Year's soup called "ozouni." I also had osechi made by my mom.

The mochi in ozouni was so good! Very soft and stretchy!
I heard it was made in an old fashioned way, with a giant stone mortar and wooden mallet.

That made me feel like we were really celebrating the New Year. :D

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どうしても、自分が日記をかくとchoppy（ぶつぎれ、とびまくり）になってしまうのだけど、さすが先生、うまくカバーしてくれたなぁ。
しんどいけど、がんばて英語日記書かなきゃ。

fujikosanを見習って、いこうと思います。