先日、親知らずを抜いたのですが、その時の話を英語日記に書きました。それを、英会話の先生に間違いを直していただいたきました。
まず、コピットの書いた英語日記から。
I had a terrible toothache yesterday.
I went to the dentist right away.
My doctor took an X-ray of my teeth and he said " According to the X-ray, everything seems all right. but
my wisdom tooth might be a cause of the pain.
So I took some pain killer and went home.
2 hours later, during dinner with my husband. the terrible pain came up again.
I was panic.
So I went to the dentist again and I had my wisdom tooth pull off .
I was so nervous while the doctor was pulling my tooth off but The anesthetic worked well I didn't feel pain.
After that the pain has gone away and I was relieved,
Luckly I had two days off so I was able to rest at home.
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ここからは先生の直してくれた文です。
Hi ○○!
I edited your diary entry. It was well written! I hope you're feeling better now, that pain sounds horrible!
Here it is:
I had a terrible toothache yesterday.
I went to the dentist right away.
The doctor took an X-ray of my teeth and said, "according to the X-ray, everything seems all right."
My wisdom tooth might be a cause of the pain, so I took some pain killers and went home.
2 hours later, during dinner with my husband, the terrible pain came up again.
I was in a panic.
So I went to the dentist again and I had my wisdom tooth pulled out .
I was so nervous while the doctor was pulling my tooth out, but the anesthetic worked well and I didn't feel pain.
After that, the pain has gone and I was relieved.
Luckily, I had two days off from work, so I was able to rest at home.
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