Q-Eng

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I make and post some English sentences for daily training.
If you find any mistakes in them, please let me know.

この書き込みは、英語学習の一貫として私 gyutaku が作った英作文です。
文法間違いやタイポなどがあれば是非教えてください。
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＜Word of the day (from http://www.learnersdictionary.com/ )＞
parallel [adjective]
1 - used to describe lines, paths, etc., that are the same distance apart along their whole length and do not touch at any point
・parallel train tracks・A square is made of two sets of parallel lines. ? The corn is planted in parallel rows.
・The lines are parallel to each other.
・The row of trees is parallel with the road.
2 : very similar and often happening at the same time
・the parallel careers of the two movie stars
・These two sentences are parallel in structure.
・Notice the parallel development/evolution of the two technologies.
3 (computers) : designed for a computer system in which very small pieces of information are sent over separate wires at the same time
・a parallel cable/connection/port/printer
1.⇒線や経路などが同じ距離に渡って沿っていて、どこでも接触しないことを表現する時に用いる(=並行した)
2.⇒とても似ているあるいは同時に起こる
3.⇒(コ)小さな情報を異なる複数の線で同時に送るコンピュータシステム用にデザインされた

＜Examples by gyutaku＞
They claimed that we have to adopt parallel operation of higher consumption tax and budget optimization to increase revenue and reduce expense.
⇒彼らは、収入増と支出減のために、消費税増と予算最適化の並行作業を採用する必要があると主張しました。

衆院選が公示されましたね。

(追記：Lang8添削結果)
添削の必要がありません。


(*)斜字は http://www.learnersdictionary.com/ からの抜粋